WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
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when and where you did something special
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who was with you
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what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Brooklynne Kenyon
On my birthday I
went to Wellington. It was fun because I got to stay with my aunty and my
little cousin. She is five and her name is Alizapata but I just call her Pata.
Once Aunty and Pata had picked me up from the airport, Pata had a surprise for me and Aunty had something
planned for us. First we did the things that Aunty had planned for us. The
first thing that we did was to go to Junglerama then we went to the movies.
Then we had burgers for dinner and then we had Pata’s surprise. It was the best
birthday cake ever. Then we got to watch Barbie Mariposa and the Princess of
Flutter Field. After that it was time to go to bed. Me and also Pata fell
asleep.
Next
steps
When finishing a story put a personal
response as to how you felt about the experience or a conclusion
